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Stand Alone's

Unexpected twist || Eleanour.

It was a lovely evening. The stars shine bright at the dark blue sky. The street where they walked through, had almost no light. Which they did on purpose so the London Eye looked like a perfect round circle that screamed to you to pay fiftheen pounds for one ride to see whole London. It was riddiculus on Louis' opinion. Fiftheen pounds was way to expensive to pay for a stupid Ferris Wheel. But the Toerists still went into the Wheel, and didn't pay attention to the expensive prise at all. Because what if this was the only time they would visite London? They couldn't come home with a story that didn't include a ride in the London Eye. So what they payed fiftheen pounds? He had been in there once. Because Eleanor really wanted to and he would do anything to make her happy. It was a lovely vieuw from up there, but not worth fiftheen pounds.
"Isn't it a lovely evening? We should do this more often don't you think?" Eleanor looked smiling at Louis, and he smiled back. Not because he had to, but just because everytime he saw Eleanor's smile he had to smile automaticly. "We should. But I would prefer to stay home with you, watching some movies. Just you and me alone." he said. Eleanor looked back at the ground and nodded. "If you prefer that, why are you taking me out on diner then?" she looked back at Louis with a questioning face. Louis laughed nervously and did not really know what to say, since he could not really say the truth. "I wanted you to have a good night." he stuttered. "But I would have a really good night at home to. Tell me Tomlinson, what is it that you're hidding from me?" she said playfull. Knowing that she could trust Louis with her whole hart. "I don't hide anything for you sweetheart, I just want a fun night out with you. I haven't seen you in a month and I think you deserve a night out with me." he gave as reason. Eleanor seemed happy with it, but stayed alert, which made Louis even more nervous.
When they reached the end of the street they stoot still at a beautiful building. It was really luxe and chic. Louis had been there before with Eleanor, but they liked the restaurant so much they came back everytime they had te change. Besides that there were really few fans.
They entered the building and directly been welcomed by one of the receptionistes.
"Goodevening sir, ma'am. Can I take your jackets?" he asked while he already stoot ready to take them. Louis took of his jacket and gave it to the young man. Eleanor did the same thing. They followed a budler who gave them a table at the most silent part of the restaurant. It was also a beautiful place to have diner because of the view you had on the Theems. They orderd some drinks and food and when the waiter left they were alone, since the corner where they sat was really quiet.
"You're right you know. Maybe we should do this more often." Louis looked dreamy at Eleanor. She smiled. "Well if we go lay on the couch watching films all day I wouldn't complain either." Louis smiled. "Maybe we should go home then." he grinned. Eleanor shaked her head. She placed her hand on his. "Let's stay here."
The food came, which was very fast as usual and Eleanor and Louis received it thankfully. They thanked the waiter and started eating.
"You know El. I never tought I would last so long with a girl." He said. Eleanor looked confused to him, but with a little bit of nerve in her eyes. "What do you mean with that?" she asked. She couldn't help it but sounded nervous. Louis was to excited to notice it. He put another piece of meat in his mouth. Just because he had to do something, not because he enjoyed it.
"Nothing special. It's just, we're already together for six years." He continued while still smiling. Eleanor still looked confused a Louis. "Don't you think that's a really long time El?"he asked. She nodded, not able to say anything because she was scared to say something wrong. Louis still didn't notice this.
"Lou, I really don't know what you're trying to say." she said hesetating and very quiet. "I just want to point out how long we are together." he said smiling. It maked Eleanor even more uncomfortable. Louis stopted eating. His face turned shy and a little bit fearful. Eleanor noticed this and stopted eating to. "Is something wrong?" she asked anxious. "No nothings wrong. But I was just wondered..." He grabbed something that he had put in his pocket earlier. It was a small black box, just a small black box. Actually nothing really special. Eleanor laughed nervously. "You were wondering..." she said to insist what Louis wanted to say. "Well..." he started. He took een deep breath, stoot up from his chair and neeled before Eleanor. "Will you marry my?" he asked nervously. He heard her gasp. "Louis." she whisperd. "I, I don't know. I..." she answerd. The smile Louis had disappeard. "What do you mean?" he stuttert. He stoot up. Eleanor had started crying. "I'm sorry Louis. I don't think I can marry you." she sobbed. "What? But, why not?" he asked confused. "I cheated on you Louis." She didn't looked at him, but looked at her plate. "What?" Louis repeated, but this time he sounded angry. "With who?" he asked directly after that. "Niall." she whisperd very subdued. For a little moment Louis didn't know what he had to do. He felt furious, but sad and disapointed to. He loved Eleanor and he thought she felt the same way back. He never though she would cheat on him. He didn't even think about it when he was on tour. "Louis please say something." Eleanor begged. "What I'm a supposed to say?" Louis screamed. He totally forgot he was in een restaurant and he was making a scene. "I don't know Lou."sobbed Eleanor. Louis shaked his head, throwed the little black box on the table and walked to the reception. There he payed and walked out of the restaurant. Leaving Eleanor there. The sadness he felt became stronger than the anger. Tears appeard in his eyes. How could she do this to him? How could she cheat on him with one of his best friends? Niall felt as a brother to him, and now he did this. He didn't even want to hear the story anymore. He just wanted to go home and lay in bed. And that was exactly what he was going to do.
Tomorrow he would go to Niall.

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Letra zei op 5 juni 2014 - 13:39:
oewh, what an unexpected twist *badumtss*
loveee it, bit surreal what if Niall and Eleanor would be together instead of Louis and Eleanor o.0
can u imagine, cause i cant xp