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FBI: The Brokenhearted One

26 juli 2012 - 20:34

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Prologue

You see that girl?
Of course you did. The moment she drove by on her big, black shiny motorcycle everybody was amazed by her dazzeling beauty.
The first thing you notice are her big cat-ish green eyes, than her long black curly hair, and finally the tattoo of a wilde colourful plant from her lower back to her shoulder.
As the guys start fantasizing, the girls get jealous. Always the same story.
I allready hear you thinking: ''Nice, she must enjoy all the attention.''
Well, no. She doesn't enjoy it at all.
''Why?'' you ask.
Of course it's handy if you're able to seduce a cop so he won't give you a ticket, and it's nice if you get free drinks from the bartender...
But when it comes to love, it never benefits her.
The guys that found her attractive were never able to look further than her boobs.
And everytime she starts a relationship, she gets screwed over in a brutal way.
Her mother didn't had a lucky love life either, on the contrary, she was getting beaten up in front of her daughter by her husband évery single day.
So how is the girl able to believe in love if it never worked for her or anyone around her?
She gave up on love, and filled the empty feeling with a great carrier and a lot of rebounds.
Everytime the guy she flirted with was getting to close to her heart, she ran away.
Up to the next one, that she conquered with one look of her beautiful eyes.
And that's where she got her nickname from: Maneater.
Do you think that's a good nickname for a girl like her?
''Well, yeah, maybe...''
Let's cut the crap already: we both know it is.
How do I know all of this?
Because that girl, with the wild plant tattoo on her back, is me.
Janelle O'Loughlin. An FBI-agent with a hectic nightlife, and a painful past.
But before you judge me, and talk crap about me...



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KiKey
KiKey zei op 31 juli 2012 - 10:00:
Ha, echt leuk gedaan! Ik genoot er meteen van! En ik krijg inspiratie mety CoS te beginnen, iets wat ik gisteravond widle doen maar ik probeerde het twee keer en mijn computer of internet crashte. Das geen toecval meer, het lot wilt niet dat ik aan CoS begin... En toch ga ik het doen


xxMarit
xxMarit zei op 29 juli 2012 - 22:24:
I have a feelimg i'm going to love this story even more than brownsville (top einde btw.)
Snel verders

xxMarit


Tweety
Tweety zei op 29 juli 2012 - 19:44:
Ga je nog verder? ( ik weet, ik ben een beetje ongeduldig, sorry )
Je kunt echt geweldig schrijven! Ik heb net ook je ander verhaal gelezen over Natalie. Geweldig mooi!
Hopelijk ga je snel verder.

Xx


Nniinnoo
Nniinnoo zei op 28 juli 2012 - 9:37:
Whaaa super!!!
Ik ga het volgen <3
Wil je me mailtjes sturen??

Vind het superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr <3

Xxx
(Oh ja, op mij profiel staat waarom ik zo lange tijd niet aanwezig ben geweest...)


LotStuff
LotStuff zei op 27 juli 2012 - 13:31:
Hell yeah!
Dit is geweldig!
Melding ;D
Kussss.