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the broken hopes of discontent

9 nov 2018 - 14:59

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Prologue

There was disrespect in every line of his body, from the way he slouched down in his chair so far his body was almost horizontal to the arched curve of his eyebrow every time another suggestion was offered. His mouth had been set in a thin line, with a slight curve towards the right corner, since he entered, by his own invitation, into a meeting that did not concern him.

The only reason he had not been refused entry by the four women getting steadily more exasperated with his grating silence only occasionally interrupted with inane proposals of his own was the one woman on his right, the very one that let him in every time—they were best friends, after all.

But even her patience was wearing thin this time.

“Maybe we could get a Magician. That would really be something.”

His mouth blossomed into a full smile now as his hand shot up. “I’m a Magician!” He shook his fingers, gave his wrist a twirl. “Well, I once made something really weird happen with my grandmother’s dog, where I swear I—” There was a tug at his sleeve, paired with a look that seemed to implore him to shut up. He did not. “I swear I could hear him talk to me. Grumpy old bugger, that.”

There was one who maybe entertained the notion, but the other three rolled their eyes almost simultaneously and dismissed it. Aecan stood up, chair scraping across the wooden floorboards, and slammed her binder closed. “We’ll resume this after a lunch break, ladies. You,” she said as her eyes bore into him. “Come with me.”

An uncomfortable five minutes later he closed the door behind him and leaned against it. “I really am a magician, though,” he pouted, head thudding back. His outstretched throat shimmered—and then the Adam’s apple, so artfully crafted, seemed to fade away. A ripple went across him, taking those disrespectful sharp lines of his body and turning them softer, darker.

In his place stood Orryn, still in his clothes, but different on every other account. Startlingly clear eyes, a thick bundle of braids tied back, slighter frame, and decidedly female. She dropped the arrogance too, the careful structuring of her facial features so that all that remained was a girl who looked tired and worried.

“Why do you always do this?” Aecan had barely-concealed anger showing from the tight set of her shoulders. “You know they would all love you if you came like yourself. They’ve been wanting to meet you for years and-“ She turned around and the words died in her bobbing throat. “What’s wrong?”

“Would you believe me if I said I have a legitimate reason this time?” Her smile was sheepish as she added, “I think I might be in trouble. Can I go piss off your colleagues some more until they leave?”

“No, no, I’ll—“ She ran a hand through her blonde, bouncy curls and sighed. “Shit, no, I will send them away. You stay here until I get back.” At the door, she looked back at Orryn. “Whatever this trouble is, we’ll fix it.”

Her steps had long retreated down the stairs when Orryn mumbled, “Gods, I fucking hope so.”


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Reacties:


CosmicPurple
CosmicPurple zei op 28 jan 2019 - 23:25:
MAKE MORE THIS.


Bodine
Bodine zei op 18 nov 2018 - 10:01:
JAAAAA. <3

En mijn iets samenhangendere mening:
1. fuck you. <3
2. je roept zoveel vragen op, in positieve zin. Het is zo, wie is Aecan (de mentor?) en wat is haar werk en weten die andere mensen nou iets van magie of niet? En het is zo, wie is Orryn en waarom doet ze zich voor als iemand anders en wat is haar probleem??
3. for my liking gebruik je misschien íéts teveel bijvoeglijk naamwoorden, maar dat kan een smaakdingetje zijn (maar je wilde feedback dus ik wilde iets zeggen en dit is alles wat ik heb).
4. deze proloog schreeuwt om verder lezen DUS WAAR IS MEER GIMME GIMME. <3
5. more more more more
6. ik ging om 10:00 studeren en het is nu 10:01 dus
7. fuck you <3


CosmicPurple
CosmicPurple zei op 9 nov 2018 - 18:20:
I am hitching my wagon to this ride, LET'S FUCKING GO



1Dzayn
1Dzayn zei op 9 nov 2018 - 14:50:
WAT IS DIT????? Kay je hebt woorden geschreven ik ben zo trots op je <3

Dit klinkt nu echt al heel tof en my god jouw engels is zo fijn om te lezen. Ik heb hier zin in. Magie en shit, jaaaaaaaaaaaa man