ankelzei op 20 aug 2012 - 19:43:
"This wasn't supposed to happen!' he yelled at her and threw his hands up in the air. ""I know Harry, calm down a bit", she whispered and gently rubbed his arm, trying to take away the pain they both felt. "It might look worse than it actually is." He nodded and gave her a sarcastic smile before he stood up and he shook his head, being uncontrollably frustrated. "She doesn't even remember me, for god's sake!"
Ik zou graag wat reacties op mijn nieuwe verhaal hebben, ik apprecieer opbouwende kritiek enorm. Positief of negatief, het kan mijn writing skills enkel verbeteren. Dankjewel!
"This wasn't supposed to happen!' he yelled at her and threw his hands up in the air. ""I know Harry, calm down a bit", she whispered and gently rubbed his arm, trying to take away the pain they both felt. "It might look worse than it actually is." He nodded and gave her a sarcastic smile before he stood up and he shook his head, being uncontrollably frustrated. "She doesn't even remember me, for god's sake!"
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Ik zou graag wat reacties op mijn nieuwe verhaal hebben, ik apprecieer opbouwende kritiek enorm. Positief of negatief, het kan mijn writing skills enkel verbeteren. Dankjewel!